Updated Storybord

This is our up to date storyboard. I think the close-up of her leaving the paint on the side is important; it subtly suggests what is about to happen and this creates humour. Her looking tired is also important as it creates realism; the audience will be less likely to say "Wouldn't she taste the paint?!". The last shot highlights her humiliation and plays a role in persuading the audience to not let this happen to them (by buying glasses from Specsavers). I think that we need to ensure the important parts of the advert are shown clearly to the audience (the paint being left by the toothpaste and her brushing her teeth with it without noticing) and the way we plan to do this is by using close-ups and extreme close-ups of important aspects within the advert.

The clips in between these will be of the woman rushing to get ready we wont show this in a alot of detail but the audience will understand that she is going to work. We dont want the audinece to find out too soon that she has mistaken the paint for the toothpaste as we still want to create most of the humour at the end, so althought using dramatic irony we are just giving the audince suttle hints about what is happening.